Sensory language refers to the use of words to create a connection to any of the five senses. In literature, sensory writing gives the reader a vivid image or description of something. The use of sensory language is a potent tool and will help children to create more detailed imagery in their writing.
Our senses help us perceive the world around us; this is why writers use sensory language. It helps us to connect to an image, description, action, or scene.
Examples of Sensory Writing
When we talk about sensory language, we’re mainly talking about adjectives. Adjectives describe words that give more detail to a noun. Here are some examples of sensory language for each of the five senses:
Still not sure? Here are some further examples: the sensory language is integrated into complete sentences; this can give you an excellent idea of using these words in your writing!
- She could see the picturesque, deserted beach in the distance. The water sparkled in the sunlight, and the sand shimmered with bright shells and shiny pebbles.
- He could hear the loud, annoying buzz of the blue bottle fly. Frustratingly, it was louder than the soft, tinkling music spilling out of the radio. So he switched the channel to roaring, clanging rock music to dry and drown out the sound of the fly.
- After they had mown the lawn, their garden smelled fresh and earthy. It was delightful, mingling with the floral, aromatic scent of the rose bushes – much nicer than the odorous, overpowering smell of fake flowers pumped out at work.
- The tarmac felt hot in the sun and rough underneath his palms. He couldn’t wait to get in between his soft, silky bedsheets at the end of the day.
- The curry was spicy, but it also had a lovely sweet tang. It might have been too hot, but the cool, minty yogurt balanced it.
The Benefits of Sensory Writing
As we’ve already established, sensory language is used in writing to create vivid imagery in the reader’s mind. Introducing your students to sensory language in literacy and English lessons will help them understand how to use it and to what effect.
Setting
Sensory writing is highly effective in helping describe places and settings. Not only is it essential that the reader has a clear idea of what somewhere looks like, but you can also tell the sounds and smells of a place. Appealing to the reader’s senses will effectively create a clear image in their mind. In addition, it can help them feel like they have been transported to the location you’re writing about. Finally, it can aid their enjoyment
Character
Character descriptions often benefit from the use of sensory language. Sensory language won’t just give us an idea of what a character looks, smells, or sounds like, but it’ll also help establish their role. For example, in some literature, sensory language can help indicate whether a character is bad or good.
An excellent example of this is the idea of physiognomy! It is the idea that a character’s external appearance indicates their characteristics and internal reality. You see this often in fairy tales, where a princess’s beauty reflects her kindness, and a witch’s ugliness reflects her wickedness. It was also trendy in the gothic movement, often featuring attractive young heroes and heroines battling against disfigured villains.
There are lots of ways you could use this to your advantage in sensory writing. Sometimes, writers subvert readers’ expectations regarding a character’s outward appearance. They harness preconceptions about physiognomy to make someone appear better or worse than they initially are and gradually reveal their character. A handsome prince might not be as dashing as he initially appears, and a disfigured character might be the kindest in the story. Physiognomy is quite an outdated belief system, so have fun playing around with expectations.
Sensory writing can also describe a character’s actions and feelings. For example, is the character sitting comfortably somewhere? What can they feel where they’re sitting? The function of sensory language is to provide a graphic presentation or image that appeals to the senses.
These are just a few examples of how sensory language can improve children’s descriptive writing. You could start by introducing them to adjectives and adverbs before showing them how they can describe things in more detail in their writing.
Where Can Sensory Writing Be Used?
Sensory language is featured in all types of creative writing. It includes poetry, plays, scripts, fiction, songs, speeches, and more. Please encourage students to use sensory language during creative writing sessions to build their vocabulary and the world they’re creating with their words.
Sensory language can even be used in factual writing, such as diary entries. For example, sensory language in a diary entry will help you accurately capture your feelings and experiences. You will then be able to look back through your diary and revisit how you felt at that moment.
Activities to Help Children Writing From the Senses
Sensory Lucky Dip
Compile a series of word cards, with each card containing a different thing that you can sense. For example, you could have hot coffee, vanilla beans, petrol, or fresh laundry for the smell cards. Divide the cards up by sense and put them face down in individual piles or separate bags. Each child can take one card for each purpose. They’ll hopefully have an excellent or strange mix of different senses! Before they get writing, please encourage them to stop and think about where and how these senses could come together. Then, they can write a short descriptive paragraph incorporating all the reasons they’ve drawn at random.
Real-World Writing from the Senses
Take inspiration from your surroundings! Without thinking too hard, get children to write down the first thing they can see, hear, feel, smell, and taste; this should be quick fire. They can then write down a paragraph using everything they’ve jotted down that they can sense. It should provide an excellent snapshot of where they were at that particular time.
Writing from Sensory Memory
As a class, brainstorm things that different sensory feelings make you think about. Maybe the smell of mints makes one child think of their grandpa. Perhaps the sight of the ocean makes another child remember an excellent holiday they went on with their family. Maybe the taste of sticky toffee pudding makes a third child think of their school dinners. You could even bring in a series of items to trigger some of these memories, such as a jar of coffee, a picture of the countryside, or a piece of silk. Get physical and tactile with these items, as they can help trigger specific memories! Once children have shared some of their memories, challenge them to write a paragraph evoking that particular memory as closely as possible, using the sensory language they’ve brainstormed.
Physical Writing from the Senses
Similarly, bring in a series of objects with solid sensory value. For example, it might be a solid-smelling perfume, a material with a distinctive touch, such as velvet, or a bit of chocolate or biscuit for a special treat! Once children have engaged with each item, challenge them to write a short paragraph describing in detail each item from a sensory standpoint, using as much rich sensory language as they can.


